雅思分析解决型问题大作文写作技巧

随着留学热的不断推升，留学生数量不断的攀升，各所大学对雅思成绩的要求也有了明显的提升。而在备考的过程中，不少考生都抱怨雅思写作提分难，提分空间小。下面是小编分享的分析解决型问题大作文写作技巧，希望能帮到大家!

题目：Student’s bad or undesirable behavior(不良行为) often poses a serious problem in many schools and colleges. What are some of the causes of this phenomenon and what can schools and parents do to reduce the problem?

译：学生的不良行为常会给一些学校带来严重的问题与后果。这种现象产生的原因是什么?学校和家长能够做些什么来减轻这种问题?

在本文中我们讲采用四段式的结构：

　　开头段2-4句

本段写背景

1 介绍社会背景，如觉得累赘也可以省略。

2 交代本文分析的事哪一个话题。

3 强调这个问题正在引起关注，本句也可省略。

4 说明文章要分析这个现象的原因和解决方案。

Currently, Student’s undesirable behavior is causing great concern. In this essay,I intend to explore the cause and the solution of this issue.

大家可以记住这样的.句式与结构。

　　第二段1-6句

分析现象的原因

1 说明本段会介绍现象的原因。

2 写这种现象的第一个原因。

3 写一句话来解释、支持这个原因。

4 写这种现象的第二个原因。

5 写一句话来解释、支持这个原因。

第二段便进入了正文部分，直接进入原因的表述。本文中可以有的原因为：

1 All kinds of media should be responsible for the students’ unacceptable behavior.

媒体应对学生的不良行为负责。

unacceptable behavior = undesirable behavior

2 Immoral and indecent trends in the society are also a bad influence on students.

社会的不良风气对学生也会有不好的影响。

immoral 不道德的

indecent 不得体的、不礼貌的

Personally speaking, I think that all kinds of media should be responsible for the students’ unacceptable behavior. To enhance the popularity of magazines or radio programs, reporters often rack their brains to make up incredible stories of achieving success and fame, such as a poor girl falling in love with a prince and a common boy picked out by a music company and finally becoming a superstar. Although adults can easily distinguish the difference between reality and fiction, the young generation might be obsessed with fantasies and they are no longer concentrating on their studies, which is detrimental to their future. Moreover, immoral and indecent trends in the society are also a bad influence on students. For instance, the youth drug abuse presents one of the most intractable problems puzzling the whole society.

　　第三段1-6句

分析现象的解决方案

1 说明本段要介绍现象的解决方案

2 写这种现象的第一个解决方案

3 解释、支持上述方案

4 写这种现象的第二个解决方案

5 解释、支持上述方案

本段将提供解决方案。一般在提供解决方式的时候我们可以采用以下的句式与结构：In light of the above factors, I am convinced that immediate action should be taken to combat this situation. Priority should be given to …For instance… Besides,…

本文中我们认为：

Both families and schools should cooperate closely to solve the problems that lead to students’ misbehavior.

家长与学校应当紧密合作以解决这个问题。

It is probably no exaggeration to say that students’ misconduct will definitely affect their future occupations and careers. The fierce social competition means only those who have made adequate preparations can survive. So, in order to guarantee them a bright future, both families and schools should cooperate closely to solve the problems that lead to students’ misbehavior. Parents cannot put off their obligation of educating their children by the excuse of their own work and schools are supposed to communicate with parents in time once there is something wrong with their kids. Only when both sides make coordinated efforts will it be possible to modify the students’ undesirable behavior.

　　结尾段2句左右

结尾段总结

1 概述这种现象的原因很多。

2 相应概括一下我们文中的几种解决措施。

结尾时可以使用：

In summary, the…of …are complicated; therefore, we should take a wide range of measures, including…结构

　　上面给大家分析了解决问题型的雅思大作文写作技巧，下面再给大家分享一篇全部适用的写法：

　　1、列数据(raising figures)

句型：

As is reported/ investigated/ researched, …

It is reported that …

A recent research conducted by …Bureau reveals that…

列数据的写作方法较讲道理更有说服力，但是这就需要我们在平时生活中多做积累才能应付列举考试中出现的各个话题的一些相关数字。

雅思考试中的数据其实可以分成两大类，一类是有科学依据的，另一类是指一些调查报告的数据，如大学生平均一天花多少时间自习，初中生平均一天花多少时间玩电脑游戏等，这类数据无据可依，考生完全可以自己根据论证内容给出数据，但一定要符合逻辑。我们通过一例来使用列数据的雅思写作方法：

retired people tend to offer service for the benefits of the family and the community.

要对这样一个topic sentence做列数据的扩展，我们首先要找到可列数据的点，此题有两处，一是退休老人的年龄，二是所花时间。结合上述句型，得出论证过程如下：

As is reported, the average time that the retired within the age group above 65 spend on the family and the community is at its length of about 5 hours per day.

　　2、比较(contrast &comparison)

在雅思大作文的写作中，考生可以拿相同或相反的事物做比较，相同关系叫对照(comparison)，相反关系叫对比(contrast)。此类论证我们重点掌握一些对比对照关系的连词：

In contrast, by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas

Likewise, similarly

　　3、引用(quotation)

在雅思大作文写作论证的过程中，表达一些观点的时候，如果能拿名人名言来进行论证则更有说服力，说明某位名人的观点和你的观点是达成一致，形成共鸣的。但引用要求考生要有相当大的积累，由于备考时间紧迫，此类论证可以少用。而不是中文写作中，引用越多越好。

　　4、让步(making concession)

让步的论证是中国考生较陌生的一个概念，其实在学状语从句时，我们就学过让步的关系，先退一步承认一个与自己观点相反的事实，再转折给出自己的观点，否定前者。句型如下：

Although/ though/ in spite of the fact that …

As is granted/ Admittedly, …

Opponents would argue that …

让步这种方法的优点为能较全面的看待一个问题，而且反驳更能有的放矢。具体例子如下：

Eg. People don not believe that saving money is a good idea in modern society.

这个Topic sentence的观点很明确，存钱在当代社会不是好主意，显然，用让步论证的话，我们要先承认存钱的优点，再根据所列有点进行反驳。

As is granted, saving money offers people a sense of security in case of emergency. However, people tend to believe that wise investment can get more profits.