英语满分优秀作文

　　考研英语作文万能模式：针砭时弊型(1)

预测范文一 Computer games

首段描述图画，揭示现象危害

As is vividly depicted in the picture, the schoolboy indulges himself in computer most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, in class, he can not concentrate himself on what the teacher says, but just falls asleep dreaming about the thrilling computer games. Recently the phenomenon that the students suffer too much from homework burdens has aroused great concern and should be given enough consideration. This phenomenon of heavy burdens imposed on our students should be condemned severely or made illegal. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害，并举例论证，预测 危害的趋势

To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several effects have been put forward. To begin with, spending too much time on the games not only results in failure in their study but also does harm to their health since they keep still in front of the computer and watch the computer without blinking the eyes. In addition, some unhealthy and violent information will tempt the children to act just like what is indicated in the game,which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below rding to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who are attached to computer games are in poor health or even drop out of school. If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of our students.

最后一段要强调解决问题，谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识，加强执法；

From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to prevent the children playing the games. On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect the students. On the other hand, it is demanding

for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving the students out of the evil hands of the internet bars. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.

　　电脑游戏 Computre games

Computre games

Computer games is a hot topic nowadays. Some people hold that it is bad. And others hold that it is good. In my view, whether good or bad is determined by the players.

If one plays computer game properly in his spare time, computer games can be an excellent source of joy. For example, something impossible in your real life can be realized in the computer

games. You can pilot a space craft and travel in the universe. Every coin has two sides. If one plays computer game excessivly, it may affects his eyesight and study.

The computer games itself is only a tool like knife. If we use it properly, it can pare apples. But if we use it to attack others. It immediatly becomes an lethal weapon.

电脑游戏

电脑游戏是当今的热门话题。有些人认为它是坏的。其他人认为它是好的。在我看来，无论是好是坏是由球员决定的。

如果一个人在业余时间玩电脑游戏，电脑游戏就可以成为一个很好的来源。例如，在你的现实生活中的一些不可能的东西，可以在计算机上实现

游戏。你可以在宇宙中驾驶飞船和旅行。每个硬币都有两面。如果一个人沉迷于玩电脑游戏，这可能会影响他的视力和学习。

电脑游戏本身只是一种工具，像刀。如果我们正确的使用它，它可以削苹果。但如果我们用它来攻击别人。它直接成为一种致命的武器。

　　Away from Net-bar Campaign 远离网吧

据报道，在徐州市回民中学，最近发起了一场运动名为“远离网络酒吧”。一千多名学生对自己的庄严承诺，他们不会花净，酒吧一分钟签订的。随着暑假临近，这是特别有意义的活动为未成年人健康成长。互联网带来了获取信息，娱乐和与他人接触的人极大的便利，而且也使一些商人，特别是网络的酒吧老板。诚然，大多数网络酒吧正在运行合法，但也确实有些产品，它涉及暴力和色情内容不健康的节目。由于大多数中学生容易受到影响，他们很难知道哪个酒吧不错，哪些不可以，只是最好，他们远离所有。此外，远离网络，酒吧还没有好学生的身体健康。由被动地坐太长时间在电脑屏幕前，无论他们的视力和体质受到影响。显然，远离网络酒吧运动是一项活动，是值得提倡，值得其他学校参考

　　the Computerized Technologies 计算机化技术

The rapid advancement of computerized technologies and the deepened pision of labor have made it possible for increasing number of inpiduals to accomplish their daily routine at home. Yet whether this development could be a blessing for not only employees but also for employers and the whole society has evolved into a case that bothers businesses and governments worldwide. From my own perspective, I agree that telecommuting would collectively bring more benefits than harm to the general public. To start with, citizens’ time, particularly of those who live in a distant location from downtown area, can be saved and the depressing traffic congestion will be eased to a large extent, provided that most workers could perform their regular work at home (mostly online). Moreover, employees would feel more relaxed and clear-minded in a familiar surrounding, which might improve the quality and efficiency all together. By contrast, workers who are reluctant to stay in the office merely try all sorts of maneuvers to kill time until 5pm. On top of that, for certain companies like Google and Microsoft, granting employees the priority to work at home is a highly advisable approach to decline the expenditure on rent and furniture, which could eventually constitute a large proportion of their overall budget. Admittedly, a series of resulting drawbacks would also be brought with the widespread of telecommuters. The primary one, undoubtedly, should be the absence of teamwork, which is the key to success of majority of projects.

计算机技术的迅速发展和深化分工的发展，使越来越多的个人完成日常生活成为可能。然而，这一发展是否能成为一个不仅为员工提供的祝福，也能为雇主和整个社会发展成为困扰全球企业和政府的案例。从我自己的角度，我认为，远程办公会集体带来的危害比一般公众更多的利益。首先，市民的`时间，特别是那些谁住在一个遥远的位置，从市中心地区，可以节省和令人沮丧的交通拥堵将得到很大程度上缓解，提供，大多数工人可以在家里进行定期工作（大多是在线）。而且，在熟悉的环境中，员工会感到更加放松和清醒，这可能会提高质量和效率。相比之下，工人们都不愿意呆在办公室只是尝试各种动作来消磨时间到下午5点。在这一点上，对于像谷歌和微软这样的公司，给予员工在家工作的优先权是一个非常明智的做法，以减少租金和家具的开支，这可能最终构成他们的整体预算的很大一部分。诚然，一系列导致的弊端也带来了远程办公的普及。第一，毫无疑问，应该是团队合作的缺乏，这是大多数项目成功的关键。

In current society, not only businesses but also inpidual workers have been increasingly integrated with one another, and therefore separated employees can hardly communicate and coordinate with their colleagues in person. Aside from that, supervision would be confronted with various obstacles, and it is both immoral and illegal to install a surveillance camera up the roof of employees’ home. In a nutshell, even though permitting staff to work at home will inevitably face the challenges from supervision and teamwork, I am still convinced that teleworking, from an enlightened standpoint, should be encouraged publicly.

在当今社会，不仅是企业，而且个别工人已经越来越多地整合在一起，因此，分离的员工可以很难与他们的同事进行沟通和协调。除了这些，监管将面临各种障碍，这是不道德的和非法安装监控摄像头的屋顶员工的家。简而言之，即使允许员工在家工作，将不可避免地面临来自监管和团队的挑战，我仍然坚信，远程工作，从一个开明的观点，应该鼓励公开。

　　高考英语满分作文:上网看法 Internet view

上网对孩子好还是不好，好在哪里，不好在哪里，并谈谈自己对这个问题的看法

We should say that every coin has its two sides. So it is with surfing on line.

我们应该说，每个硬币都有两面。所以这是与网上冲浪。

Generally speaking, students will benefit a lot from Internet. People can get lots of useful information through the Internet quickly ,no matter it is national or throughout the world. We can also listen to the music and chat with the friends far most important of all is that we can search many foreigners who speak English as their native languge, which can help us improve our Enlish can send Email to our good friends in a few seconds---with the internet your friend don't need to wait for so long time as receiving a letter as before.

一般而言，学生会受益很多，从互联网。人们可以通过互联网获得大量有用的信息，不管是国家还是世界。我们也可以听音乐和外地的朋友聊天。最重要的是，我们可以寻找许多外国人讲英语作为他们的母语，这可以帮助我们快速提高我们的英语水平。我们可以在一个网上朋友不要几秒钟---我们的好朋友发电子邮件需要等待很长时间才收到一封信。

But it also can spread many side example ,there are some sexy news and pictures on web which will not do good to teenagers. And there are some games that can easily attract the students and even make you addict to the games so you can waste a lot of valuable time.

但它也可以传播许多副作用的例子，网络上有将不利于青少年的一些性感的新闻和图片。还有一些游戏，可以很容易地吸引学生，甚至让你沉迷于游戏，这样你可以浪费很多宝贵的时间。

On the whole it will give you both good and bad things, the thing matters much is how do you make use of it.

总的来说，它会给你既好又坏的东西，这件事很重要的是你如何利用它。

　　计算机时代 Computer Age

In recent years, computers have grown in popularity. You can find them not only in the universities but on farms and in factories, shops and other places. The number of private computers has also risen tremendously within the past few years。

近年来，电脑越来越普遍。你不仅们可以在学校看到电脑，在农场、工厂，商店和其他地方都可以看到。在过去的几年中私人电脑的数量也在快速增长。

Computers can do many useful things. They can provide people with efficient work, colorful entertainment and accurate calculations. High up in space and deep down in oceans, they are used to make scientific discoveries. On farms and in factories, they help to do difficult work. In offices and at homes, they take over routine jobs. With their incredible potentials, fantastic speed and unbelievable convenience, computers are getting increasingly important in our life.

电脑能做许多有用的事情。他们可以为人们提供高效的工作，丰富多彩的娱乐，精确计算。高到宇宙低到海洋，它们都被用来做出科学发现。在农场、工厂里它们帮助完成困难的工作。在办公室或家里，他们接管了日常工作。以其难以置信的潜力，惊人的速度和令人难以置信的便利，电脑在我们的日常生活中越来越重要。

The truth of the matter, however, is that any new technology, including computers, has a "dark" side. Computer crimes, which are difficult to detect, cause a lot of trouble to business and industry. Unexpected computer viruses may destroy a large quantity of useful information. Furthermore, the indulgence of children in computer games is very bad for their mental and physical healthy development. We should therefore, be careful in using computers.

然而，事情的真相是任何新的技术，包括电脑，都有“黑暗”的一面。电脑犯罪行为很难发现，却可以对商业和工业造成很大的麻烦。意想不到的电脑病毒可能毁坏大量有用的信息。此外，孩子们对电脑游戏的沉迷对他们的身心健康是有害的。因此，我们应该小心使用电脑。